Draft 2 - Inga
"Oh dear" Piglet felt worried now. "I'd better go fetch Christopher Robin, he'll know what to do!"
When Piglet arrived at Christopher Robin's he was panting and he kept muddling his words."What's the matter, Piglet" Christopher Robin asked, holding up his hands.
"It's Pooh" Piglet panted, jumping up and down now, and pulling on C.R.'s hand urgently.
"Pooh?"
"Yes, yes, Pooh, I'm tellin' yer... follow me." Piglet pointed.
They hurried off to Owl's Piglet in the lead.
Meanwhile Pooh dozed in his chair, just as he'd fallen, his arms and legs flung out.
When his snoring startled him awake it seemed to Pooh that Piglet was taking a very long time.
When his snoring startled him awake it seemed to Pooh that Piglet was taking a very long time.
"Here" Piglet said. Stopping at the roots of Owl's beach. They climbed up.
Leaning over Pooh's shoulder, shaking him gently, Christopher Robin asked,
"How are you now?"
"Uhh, hmm" Pooh groaned, holding his belly and then his head too.
"That'll be Owl coming home" Christopher Robin sighed in relief.
Owl nodded, then in his usually careful way he thought outloud.
Christopher Robin, interrupted him to say,
"So Owl, you think Pooh is hungry?"
"Well, could you very sweetly go and get his honey for him?"
"Why, yes I suppose I could"
"Here he is", piglet squealed from his lookout by the door.
They carefully gave Pooh bear his jar of honey and after a few pawfuls Pooh already felt much more himself.
He offered honey to all his friend in turn.
"Thank you Piglet for getting Christopher and thank you Christopher for helping and Owl for getting my honey." Pooh said gratefully.
"Thank you Piglet for getting Christopher and thank you Christopher for helping and Owl for getting my honey." Pooh said gratefully.
As they said goodbye to Owl, Pooh realised that it was
already afternoon. Maybe I'll call it an adventure he thought and go
home.
Pooh, Piglet and Christopher Robin walked back arm in arm. As Pooh started humming, Christopher Robin sighed under his breath,
"Dear, silly old bear".
Pooh, Piglet and Christopher Robin walked back arm in arm. As Pooh started humming, Christopher Robin sighed under his breath,
"Dear, silly old bear".
Lol i love how you've actually written out the way exactly how Pinglet speaks. Does the story continue?
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